Realms of Fiction  -  Critique Sheet v2

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AUTHOR: ________________________________________________________________

Name of piece: _________________________________________________________

Number of PAGES: _________     number Range: ___________

date received: ___________     Critique due: ___________

Critiqued by: __________________________________________________________

Circle what best applies

Mechanics

a.  Punctuation: Needs work   Improved    Great   _________________

b.  Spelling:    needs work   Improved    great   _________________

c.  Grammar:     needs work   improved    Great   _________________

1.  Point-of-View [POV]: Confusing     OKAY, BUT NEEDS WORK       Great 

    CommentS: __________________________________________________________

2.  Plot:    WHAT plot?  CONFUSING    WEAK    FAIR    IMPROVED    great

    CommentS: __________________________________________________________

3.  Characters:   WEAK   OUT OF CHARACTER   LACKED DEPTH   FAIR   STRONG

    Strong characters: _________________________________________________

    Weak characters: ___________________________________________________

4.  STORY Flow:     CONFUSING     LOGICAL FLOW     Great

    A. THESE Story elements are thin, flesh out: _______________________

    B. Elements present, writing is confusing here: ____________________

5.  Pacing:         SlUGGISH     Too fast     About right

    Other Comments: ____________________________________________________

6.  What I like best about this piece: _________________________________

7.  What I disliked about this piece: __________________________________

8.  I normally read this genre?     Yes     No     Sometimes

9.  Overall Rating:  1    2    3    4    5     6    7    8    9    10

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